Amma Makanu Nalkiya Santhwanam – Part 1

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Ente peru Lalitha. Eniku 39 vayasundu. Njanoru veetammayaanu. Ente bharthavinte peru Ashokan. Ashoketan Dubaiyil aanu joli cheyyunathu. Oru varsham koodumbol Ashoketan naatil vannit pokum.

Njanum Ashokettanum pranayichaanu kalyaanam kayichathu. Ente 19 mathe vayasilaanu enteyum Ashokettanteyum vivaaham. Eniku randu makkalundu. Moothavan Shivan ilayaval Parvathy. Shivan mon collegil aadya varsham padikunnu. Parvathy pathaam classil padikkunnu.

Enne kurich parayukayaanenkil, njan pandu muthalke sundariyaayirunu. Collegil padikkumbol ente soundaryam kandu orupad payyanmar ente purake nadinnitumundu, ishtam paranjittumundu athil oraalaayirunnu ente Ashoketan.

Ashoketanum enikkum ore pokkamaayirunnu. Ashokettanu irunda niramaayirunnathukondu njangal thammil cherilla ennu kureper vimarshichittum njan athonnum kaaryamaakila. Ashokettanteyum enteyum kalyaanamaayirunnu njan kanda eka swapnam. Angane njangal vivaahitharaayi.

Kalyaanathinu munbu eniku mulakalum shareeravum kuravaayirunnu. Kalyaanam kayinju ente makkale prasavichathode ente mulakalkum shareerathinnum valippam koodi. Ente mulakalku shareerathinu cheratha valuppamaayirunnu. Churikki paranjaal ente mulakal orupad valuthayirunnu.

Ente valya mulakale othukki vekkaan njan 38D size brazieraanu aniyunnathu. Shareerathinu valippam undaayittum ente akara vadivinu oru kuravum vannitillayirunu.

Ente idupinte veedhiyum, thudakalkum chanthikkum valippavum kooduthalayathukondu leggings aniyunnathu Ashokettanu ishtamallayirunnu. Athukondu njan sareeyaanu kooduthalum dharikaaru.

Ente shareerathe ellarum mizhichu noki nilkunnathukondu Ashokettan enne purathukondupokan madichirunnu. Naatil enne ottakaaki pokan Ashoketanu ishtamallayirunu. Ente shareera bhangikondu naatil arelum enne enthelum cheyummennorthu Ashakettan bhayapettirunnu.

Pakshe Ashoketanu enne samshayikaarilla. Ennodulla snehavum kurayukayumilla. Njangal angane santhoshapoorvam jeevichu vannu. Ashoketan Dubayilek poyittu ippo randu maasam thikanju.

Angane irikke ente mon shivante swabaavathinu chila maatangal njan shredhichuthudangi. Avante kannukal chemmanu kidannu. Avan sheriyayittu bhakshanam kayikunilla, urangunilla, padikunnilla. Ennodum parvathy molodum avan deshyathilaayirunnu samsarikunnathu.

Onnu randu praavishyam kudich lakkuketta ivane avante suhruthukkal veetil kondaaki. Shivante maatangal kandu njan bhayapettu.

Angane shivante uta suhruthine njan phone vilich anweshichathode karyangolokke njan arinju. Moonu varsham pranayicha pennu mattoruvanumaai aduppamundennarinja shivante samanila thetti ennanu njan avante kootukaranilninnu ketathu.

Enikente shivanodu sahathaapam thoni. Njan orupad aashwasipikaan shremichuvenkilum avanathonnum kelkaan thayaaraayilla.

Avan avanethanne veruthu thudangi. Oru divasam shivante roomilek chenna njan kandathu avan fanil saree kettikondu nilkunnathaanu. Njan aake bhayannu nilavilichu avane poi ketti pidich karanju.

Njan karayunnath kandu avan athu cheyyan muthirnilla. Avan aathmahathya enna chinthayilninnum pinmariyenkilum avante vishamangal avane vetayaadikondirunnu.

Iniyum avan enthenkilum kadumkai cheyyumennu pedichu njan avane ente roomileku kondu vannu.

Paarvathi molude room ozhike baakiyulla ella roomum njan lock ittu pooti. Avante aduthuninnu avane shredhikaan njan theerumanichu.

Rathri urangumbol avane ente aduthu kidathi. Shivante karyangalonnum njan Ashokettane ariyichilla. Adhehavum vishamikanda ennu karuthiyittanu.

Shivane njan ente kanvettathu thanne nirthi. Ente kannmunbilninnu avane pokan njan anuvadichilla. Avante collegil vilichit oru maasam njan leave chothichu. Avanu ishtamulla bakshanavum palahaarangalum njan nalki.

Parvathimolku tuition ullathukondu kooduthal samayam aval veetil undaakarilla. Orammaku thante makanu ethratholam sneham kodukavo athrekkum sneham avanu njan koduthittum oru maatavu avanil kandilla.

Avan kulikaan kerumbol bathroom door lock cheyyan njan sammathikaarilla. Njan kulikaan kerumbozhum bathroom lock cheyyathe chaari idum. Avan ente kannmunbilthanne venamennu njan aagrahikunnathukondu avante munbil ninnu njan vasthram maaran thudangi.

Ente swantham makante munbil ninnu vasthram maarunnathil oru vishamamo nanakedo enikundaayilla. Avan ente shareeram kandaalum avanu oru vikaaravum thonillennu enik athra urappaayirunnu.

Avan ella divasavum kamukiye orthu karayumaayirunnu. Divasam kazhiyumthorum avante karachil kuranju vannu. Enik samadhaanamaayi.

Kurach naal kazhinjappol avante swabhaavathinu vere chila maatangal kandu thudangi. Avan enne thurichu nokan thudangi pakshe athu njan karyamaakiyilla. Njan vasthram maarumbol ente shareerathe avan nokaan thudangi.

Njan ente brazier urumbozhum aniyumbozhum avan ente mulakale ima vettathe nokiyirunnu. Avan ente shareerathe adimudi nokunnathu kandittum enik avanod oru deshyamo veruppo thoniyilla.

Avan ente shareerathe shradhikunnathu kandittum njan avante munbil thanne ninnu vasthram maari. Ente shareeram kandu avanu, avante kaamukiye marakkaan patunnundenkil avideyalle ente vijayam.

Ente valya mulakakum chanthiyum vayarum veedhiyulla iduppum thudakalum avan kothiyode nokunnathu kandittum njan avante munbilninnuthanne vasthram maarunnathu thudarnu.

Anganeyirikke oru divasam njanum shivanum avante collegileku poi principale kandu thirike vannu. Njan oru pink blousum pink sareeyumanu dharuchirunnath.

Veetil ethiya njanum shivanum vasthram maaran roomil kayari. Njan vasthram maarunnathum kaathu avan beddil irunnu. Avan noki irikke njan vasthram azhichu. Njan ente tholilninnu pin azhichu sareethumbu thazheku ittu blouse azhikanaayi pokumbol shivan enne vannu ketti pidichitt karayaan thudangi.

Shivanu pokkam kuravaayirunnathkondu ketti punarumbol avante mukham ente valya mulakalkidayil amarnu. Ente mulayil avante mukham amarumbol njan onnu virachu. Njan avane aashwasippikan shremichenkilum avan thudarchayayi karanjukondirunnu.

Kettipidich karayunnathinadakku avante valathu kai ente idathu mulayude purath vechu pakshe njan athu kaaryamaakiyilla. Ente valya mulayude purathu avante kai valare cheruthu pole eniku thoni.

Karayunnathinidakk pettanu ente idathu mula avan njekki amarthi! Enikku sugham moothu pakshe njan niyanthrichu pidichu ninnu.

Veendum randaamathu avan amarthi njekkiyappol sugham kondu enikku sheelkarangal undaakan thoniyenkilum njan niyanthrichu adakkipidichu. Moonaamathum avan ente mulaye njekki amarthi pidichu vechu. Sukham kondu njan onnu virachu.

Veendum thudarchayaayi ente idathu mula avan blousinte purathkoodi njekki amarthi pidich pizhinjappol Sugham kondu njan kannukal adachenkilum ente sheelkarangale njan adakkivechu. Njan ente sheelkarangale niyanthrikaanulla eka karanam, avan orikkalum ariyaruth avante swantham amma sugham anubhavikunnundennu.

“Njan entha ee cheyunnathu. Njan prasavicha ente swantham makanu thanne ente mulakal pidikkaan kodukunnu. Ashoketane njan chathichu. Ashokettanu maatramulla ente mulakal ente makanu njan kodukunnu. Eniku ente makanodu venda ennu parayaan patunilla. Enikente makante thalli maatan thonunilla. Ashoketta ennod shamikkane ellam nammude makanuvendiyalle. Sorry Ashoketa extremly sorry” ennu ente manasil njan paranjukondirunnu.

Ente makan enne kettipunarnukondu thanne ente idathu mula njekki pizhinju udachu. Avante karachil ninnittum avan enne kettipidich ninnu ente mula njekki udach pizhinjukondirunnu.

Pettanu calling bell adichu. Njan ente makane thalli maati. Nighty dharichu njan munbuvashathe vaathil thurannapol parvathy tuition kayinju thirichethinilkunnu.

Njan bhakshanamundaakan kitchenilek poi. Ente kithappu ithuvare maariyilla. Joli cheyyumbol ente chintha muzhuvanum shivanayirunnu. Jolikidekk njan roomileku chennu avane noki.

Avan beddinte oru moolakku vishamichirikunnu. Njan thirike kitchenilek poi. Parvathikku bhakshanam eduthu koduthitt njan roomilek chennu shivanu chooruti. Avan madikathe choru muzhuvanum kazhichu.

Choru kazhichu kayinja parvathy uchakku sheshamulla tuitionu yaathrayaayi. Veendum njanum ente makanum ottakaayi. Ente hridayamidippu koodi, shwaasam uyarnu, shareeram viraykaan thudangi.

Njan melle nadannu roomileku kayari ente towelum brazierum pantiesum adipaavadayum eduthu kulikaan kayari. Epravishyam njan bathroom door lock ittanu kulichathu. Kulichkondu nilkumbolaanu nighty edukaan marannennu njan mansilaakiyathu.

Enthayalum kulich kayinju thala thorthi ente red brazierum red pantiesum brown adipaavadayum aninju njan purathirangi.

Purathirangiya udane shivan enne vannu ketti pidich veendum karanjuthudangi. Kettipidich karayunna shivan ente brazierinte hookilum strapilum avante kaikal urassikondirunnu.

Njan manasil “guruvaayoorappa, enik niyanthraranam tharanne” ennu prarthichu.

Kettipidich avan enne beddil iruthi. Avan ente valathuvashathu chernirunnu ente valathu tholil thala chaaychu kidannu karachil thudarnu. Ente hridayamidippu koodi vannu. Njan ente makante munbil brazier ittu irukkunu. Ithellam Ashokettan arinjaal annu ente andyamaayirikkum.

Ente valathu tholil thala chaaychu kidakunna shivan avante idathu kai ente purakilkude konduchennu ente idathu vayaril pidichu valichu njekki. Sugham moothenkilum njan niyanthrichu. Avan thudarchayaayi ente idathu vayar njekkikondirunnu. Ethra sugham kittiyalum niyanthranam kai vidaruthennu njan manasill urappichu.

Avan avante valathu kai ente nenjiloodeyum mula vettiloodeyum urassikondu ente valathu mulayil njekki udachu pizhinju thudangi. Enikkundaaya sugham kondu njan mukham mukalilek uyarthi kannukal adachu “niyanthranam tharane krishnaaa” ennu manasil aavarthichu paranjukondirunnu.

Ente randu mulakalilekum avante kai kondupoyi njekki pizhinju. Avan ente mulakale kooduthal shakthiyodukoodi njekki pizhinju kashakki pidikkave sugham niyanthrikaan pattathe njan urakke “Aaaaaaaahhhhhh shivaaaaaaaaaaa” ennu neeti vilichu.

Njan sugham anubhavikunnundennu mansaakiya shivan veendum shakthiyodukoodi ente valya mulakal njekki kashakki udachu pizhinju eniku enthanillatha sugham thannu. Ente shareeram virachu njan mukham pokki sheelkaramundaaki.

Njan: Aaaaaaaaaahhh shivaaaaaa moneeeeeee aaaaaaahhhhh melllee pidikadaaaa aaaaaahhhh moneeee aaaaahhhh melle daaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaahh aaaaaahhh melle pidikku aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh..

Avante idathukai kondu ente vayarum valathukai kondu ente valya mulakalum njekki udachu.

“Ente Ashoketanu maatramulla mulakal mattoralku athum ente swantham makanu njan pidikaan kodukkunnu. Ente guruvaayoorappa njan entha ee cheyane, ente Ashokettane njan chathichallo” ennulla karyangalorthu eniku manasil vallathe kuttabodham thoni. Njan sheelkarangalkidayiloode avanodu parayaan shramichu.

Njan: Haaaaaaaa mone shivaa daaa mathi monee aaaaaahhh nammal ee cheyunaath valya thettaa moneee haaaaaaaa mathiiii mone namukku nirthaam haaaaaaaa mone mathiiiiiiii vendaaaa please daaaaa aaaaaaaaaaahhhhh.

Njan nirthaan paranjappol thanne avan ente dehathuninnum kai eduthumaati. Njan sheenichu kithachu, ente hridayamidippu kuranju saadharana nilayaayi.

Kai eduthumaatiyittum avante kannukal ente mulakalilaayirunnu. Njan beddilninnu enitu nighty edukkan cupboard thurannapol avan ennod karanjukondu paranju.

Shivan: Amma please amma enikku ammayude mulakal maathram mathi amma. Njan ente kaamukiye ethra marakkaan shremichittum patunilla. Ammayude mulakale kaanan thudangiya sheshamaanu njan avale marannu thudangiyathu. Please amma, eniku avale muzhuvannayum marakkanam athinu enikku ammayude mulakal venam amma.

Ithu paranjukondu avan karayaan thudangi. Avan paranjathu ketu eniku manasalivundaayi. Ente makanu ente mulakal maatram anubhavikaan kodukkunnathil entha thettu. Njan ente mulakal avanu kodukkaan theerumaanichu.

Njan avante arikathu chernirunnu “ammayude mon karayanda, vaaa ammayude mulayil pidikk” ennu paranju avante kai njan ente mulayude purathu vechu.

Avan kaneer thudachitt ente mulakal veendum njekki kashakki udachu. Njan kannukal adachu aa sugham aaswadichu. Kurach neram kayinju avan ente brazierinte hook ayichit enne beddilek kidathi. Beddil kidakunna ente tholile strap avan thaazheku valichu brazier mulakalilninnum maati.

Ente amoolyamaaya valya mulakalum mula njettukalum kandu avan ambarannu. Avante munbil kootan parvathangale pole nilkunna ente mulakale kandu avan ambarannu. Njan veluthu thuduthirikunnathukondu ente mula njettukalku ilam chemmapu niramaayirunu.

Avan kure neram ente randu mula njettukaleyum nokiyirunnit ente purath kidannu amarnu. Ente purath kidanna avan ente randu valya mulakalum randu kai vechu cherthu pidichitt chumbanam nalkithudangi.

Ente mulakale avan chumbichukondu ente idathu mula njettu vaayilittu. Vaayinullil irikunna ente mula njettil avan naavu kondu karakki ilakki urinji valichu. Enthenillatha sugham eniku kitti.

Avan ente mula njettu urinji edukkumbol ente shareerathilninnu athmaavu valichedukunna pole enik anubhavapettu. Idakidak avan ente mula njettil irukki kadichu. Njan sugham kondu pidanju, kannukal adachu, thala purakilek chaychu, deham pokki urakke sheelkarangal undaaki.

Njan: Haaaaa aaaaahhh haaaaa aaaahh ninte ammayude mula kudikk monee haaaaaaa monee shivaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaahhhhhh kadikallee haaaaaaaaa mellee kudikadaaa haaaaaaaaaaa aaaaahh aaahhhh ente shivaaa haaaaaaaa moneeee kadikalle ammaku vedanikunnu haaaaaaa melle daaaaaaaaa melle kudikkuuu aaaaaaaaaaahhh.

Kadikanda ennu paranjittum avan veendum mula njetukalil kadichukondirunnu. Ente randu mula njettukalum avan nunanju kadichu. Njan vedhanayum sughavumkondu arikathukidanna thalayinayil irukki pidichu. Ente makanu vendi njan vedhana sahichu kidannu.

Ente mula njettukal aarthiyode nunayunna shivane kandu avan kaikunjaayirikunna kaalam eniku orma vannu. Njan annu arinjilla 18 varshangal kayinju ente mula njettukal veendum avan vaayilaaki kudikumennu.

Ente makan ente mulakal aaswadichu nunanju kudikkunnath kaanan enikku orupad santhosham thoni. Avante santhoshathinaayi enikundaaya vedhana sahichu njan kidannu. Vedhana koodumbol njan thalayinayil irukki pidichannu njan vedhana sahichathu.

Angane manikoorukal neendu ente mula avan nunanjukondirunnu. Manikkoorukalolam njan sughavum vedhanayum anubhavichu sheelkarangal undaaki kidannu koduthu. 1 maniku thudangiya mulakudi 4 maniyaayitum avan nirthiyilla. Avanu sheenavum thoniyathumilla.

Eniku orupad santhoshavum samaadhanavum thoni. Ente Ashoketan polum ithreyum manikur neram ente mulakalku sugham thannitilla. Moonu manikoor neendu sheelkarangal undaakiya enikku vallaandu sheenam thoni. Pakshe eniku avane nirthaan thoniyilla. Karanam athrekkum sugham enikku kittunundaayirunnu. Njan aaswadichu kidannukoduthu.

Pettannu calling bellinte shabdam ketu njan njetti. Parvathy tuition kayinju thirichethiyennu enikku manasilaayi.

Njan shivane pidich maati brazier ittu nighty dharichu purath vannu main door thurannu. Viyarthukulich nilkunna ennod parvathy “nallonam viyarkunundallo amma enthu cheyuvayirunnu” ennu chothichu.

“Amma paathrangal kazhukuvaayirunnu mole” ennu njan kithachukondu avalod paranju. Parvathymol avalde roomileku poi. Njan thirike ente roomileku poyittu towel eduthu njan viyarppu thudachu.

Angane divasangalku shesham ente makante mukhathu chiri vidarnathu njan kandu. Njan avante nettiyil chumbanam nalkiyitt kitchenilekpoyi.

Kitchenile joli kayinju halilek vannapol shivan tv kaanunnu. Avan tv kandit kure divasangalaayi. Njan karanam ente makan saadharana jeevithathilek thirike vannennarinja enik orupad santhosham thoni.

Angane raathri njangal ellaavarum orumichirunnu athaazham kazhichu.

Ravile tuition ullathukondu parvathimol nerathe urangaan roomileku kayari. Veendum njanum ente makanum ottakaayi. Ente hridayamidippu koodi.

Shivan ente roomileku nadannu kayari. Ente makanu veendum ente mulakal anubhavikaan kodukendiverummo enna chodyam ente manasil uyarnnu. Njan pathiye ente roomileku kayari. Njan kayariyathum shivan vannu room door lock cheythu.

Thudarum.

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